Need oppinions/I'd like to trade!

Im trying to follow one story line with the weekly prompts and I'd really like to know how they are, what I can improve on, amd other oppinions. All of my prompts so far can be found Here excluding the one on the very bottom (i believe its goodbye midnight) and the goodbye midnight prompt. 

Also I'd like some artwork for a couple of my stories if anyone is willing to trade it for a oneshot...i can only do limited factions but if anyone is interested I can give you my list!
At the moment I'd really like the world of warcraft artwork or a Sailor Moon artwork...