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Subject: Mission B.F. - Vocaloid Len Luv Story Thu Jun 28, 2012 5:55 pm
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Welp, I've decided to join as well. The MISSION rant/review idea belongs to Hatter while the different icon emtion idea belongs to Miyu. I'll be doing a FF7 story as well as this Vocaloid one so look out for that one as well if you like these~.
There are many worlds besides ours… These worlds are called ‘fandoms’, each unique and follow a different set of laws. However, the balances of those fandoms are being destroyed by mysterious forces. And it is our job, at the FFG Bureau, to figure out and destroyed these forces to set the fandoms’ balance back to normal!
We will send out one of our top five, one from a elite squad called STAFF. This is the story of one of those agents, one by the name of Rin Rin Signal, to set the balances of those worlds back!
Will this girl succeed or will the universe go down into chaos?
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Ah~. Fresh air! I haven’t been out of the bureau for awhile! Everybody seem to be out on missions, even our new recruit, Miyu-chan’s little bro, has been out restoring the balance of these fandoms. Hopefully I'll be able to help~.
Hello Rinny-tan, Miyu here. Are you at your fandom yet?
Ah~! Miyu! U-Um, correct. I am. This place looks a lot like our world.
Correct. I knew you could investigate here well, since you really like this fandom.
Ah Vocaloid~. Well, you choose right then! I will certainly do my best for this fandom, I really like this place.
I’m glad. I’ll be sending some info on your target, but it be best to keep investigating until we really know what you’re up against.
Very well! I’ll do my best!
Be careful now.
[MISSION START!]
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Vocaloid Len Luv Story
…That’s the title? Are your serious? What the… The title is so booorrrriiinnnnggggg~! You have to draw your reader in! Plus, if you’re going to spell ‘love’, spell it right. I’m guessing this person is American…. Because if they are, then they prove the stereotype correct…
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Yamamoto Chiharu
 Age: 14 Personality: Nice, kind, caring, lovable, thickheaded, a bit shy but daring, loves making friends and cherishes them, acts hyper with friends (in this story, Rin is the only one that can make her act childish and hyper)once in a while, clumsy Hobbies: singing, anything to do with music, cooking, being with her loved ones Likes: Bananas, candy, pillows/plushies, music, friends, family, bugs, also enjoys Rin's road roller sometimes Dislikes: mean people, spicy food, scary stuff (like haunted houses, horror movies) Family(that are in the story): Nagihiko and Karin (her cousins)
Hm… That character reminds me of a character from Lucky Star, Kagami. I wonder if this girl knows of this show?
See what just happened? That’s why I generally discourage taking a picture from the internet, you don’t know if the picture is actually a picture of a character from a actual show and I don‘t see why people can’t write a description of their character’s looks. And knowing how popular Lucky Star is, I’m thinking she probably did know of Kagami. As for the description… it’s rather bland, doesn’t really give us much of the character.
Wait a minute...
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Hobbies: singing, anything to do with music
… How cliché of Vocaloid fanfics… In fact, I can already think of how the OC and Kagamine Len, the love interest, will connect and meet. The OC, Yamamoto Chiharu, will be at a place where Len will just happened to be, singing or playing a instrument. Len will be amazed at how well Chiharu sings or plays and will try to befriend her and will instantly think she’s cute but will be rather shy when with her. But there will be something in the way of their love, like a person like Miku, Rin, Neru, or even Meiko or one of the OCs of the story to stop their love or some event that will make the Vocaloids love Chiharu even more and hate that person even more.
*sigh* That’s how clichéd Vocaloid fanfics go… I don’t understand why an Vocaloid OC talent always have to be singing or playing a instrument like the piano or violin or guitar… I mean, I know Vocaloid has to do with music and all but this gets boring rather fast because everybody and their mother uses this.
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Yamamoto Karin
Her looks are similar to the girl in the middle but older Age: 25 Personality: Nice, a bit demanding, strong and confident Hobbies: shopping, cooking, watching TV, playing video games Likes: Veggies, spicy food, family, friends, music, hair stuff, malls Dislikes: coffee, useless dating shows, being bossed around, people who bully her friends and family Family: her younger brother, Nagihiko, and her cousin, Chiharu
This kind of reminds me of how Khloe Wilder deals with OCs that aren’t hers/the main character. This character has much less info than Chiharu does. If you’re not going to give that much info then don’t even bother with it! But then again, I rather not post any at all. You can give us info on your OC in the beginning chapters, that’s what beginning chapter are for; giving us a little background info on your character, for us to get to know your character.
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Yamamoto Nagihiko
He looks like this but without the 2 long locks of hair Age: 20 Personality: Nice, kind, calm, a bit protective when needed, gets sad easily Hobbies: anything to do with music except singing, martial arts/karate, swimming (sports),he also works at his music store a lot Likes: sushi, sports, music, sodas Dislikes: bullies, copycats, bribery, crazy concerts/performances Family: older sister Karin, and his cousin, Chiharu
So he doesn’t like crazy performances, eh? I have a feeling that Nagihiko might be the enemy of Len’s and Chiharu’s blossoming love!
Either way… Somebody will be disliked. Or at least, that’s what my hypothesis is along with the clichéd “We’re both good at music and I think you’re cute so let’s fall in love!” thing that I explained when I saw information on Chiharu.
Hm? There seems to be more information…
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Others -Kagamine Len -Kagamine Rin -Hatsune Miku -Sakine Meiko -Shion Kaito (So the 5 vocaloids) *BTW I DO NOT OWN VOCALOID!!! Stay tuned for Ch.1 coming up soon~ :)
…Why should I really know who else is in the story? What not introduce characters in each chapter when they appear instead of just telling us? Also why isn’t MEIKO in this…? Or does this girl not know that Sakine Meiko is actually a fanmade based of off MEIKO, not MEIKO herself?
*sigh* People should really brush up on their knowledge…
Anyways, Sakine Meiko isn’t the actual MEIKO, she’s just a fanmade based off of MEIKO. She’s supposed to be the younger version of MEIKO, hence the reason for how young she looks and why her design is different. In fact, the only reason why Sakine is so well-known compared to other fanmades is because of a well-made MMD video that she sings and dances in along with Kagamine Rin/Len, Hatsune Miku, KAITO, Yowane Haku, Akita Neru, and Kasane Teto called “Honey”. This currently has over a million views on YouTube. Notice how different Sakine looks from MEIKO and that her voice is actually higher than MEIKO’s regular voice.
I also have something to say about the KAITO thing. I don’t think it’s good to add his fanon last name in a story where he’s a Vocaloid. My reason is because Vocaloids are androids in stories like these, so I don’t think it matters if he has a last name or not and his last name was mainly created because of fanmades based off of him that were his ‘brothers’. They needed to make a last name to show that they were related so they made up ‘Shion’. Not only that, but I think it’s better to use the last name only when KAITO is human or when his ‘siblings’ are involved.
Rinny-tan, do you hear me?
Yup~.
Good. How has your mission been as of late? Good?
I have a hypothesis of our target being a Mary-Sue, the effect being everybody willing to become happy servants and having everything being very clichéd.
That’s not very good! Try to catch or destroy the target as soon as possible!
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Sun Nov 05, 2023 7:08 pm by Salya
Subject: Mission B.F. - Vocaloid Len Luv Story 
Ah~. Fresh air! I haven’t been out of the bureau for awhile! Everybody seem to be out on missions, even our new recruit, Miyu-chan’s little bro, has been out restoring the balance of these fandoms. Hopefully I'll be able to help~.
Hello Rinny-tan, Miyu here. Are you at your fandom yet?
Ah~! Miyu! U-Um, correct. I am. This place looks a lot like our world.
…That’s the title? Are your serious? What the…
See what just happened? That’s why I generally discourage taking a picture from the internet, you don’t know if the picture is actually a picture of a character from a actual show and I don‘t see why people can’t write a description of their character’s looks. And knowing how popular Lucky Star is, I’m thinking she probably did know of Kagami.
This kind of reminds me of how Khloe Wilder deals with OCs that aren’t hers/the main character. This character has much less info than Chiharu does. If you’re not going to give that much info then don’t even bother with it! But then again, I rather not post any at all. You can give us info on your OC in the beginning chapters, that’s what beginning chapter are for; giving us a little background info on your character, for us to get to know your character.
So he doesn’t like crazy performances, eh? I have a feeling that Nagihiko might be the enemy of Len’s and Chiharu’s blossoming love!
That’s not very good! Try to catch or destroy the target as soon as possible!
Very well, proceed with caution and good luck!